You are next level, this is insanely well done!!
The timing is so tight, so punchy throughout. Works great with the exaggerated composition and palette.
For seeing this for the first time, I thought it had exceptional pacing of the story; it was unique, but it didn't confuse or bore me whatsoever - the show-don't-tell works great haha.
And I thought the voice acting worked naturally well with the over-the-top script.
...and excellent use of music I must add ^^
Very fun pilot, I wish you the best with your next steps!!